The maps below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps illustrate the developments which took place in the Grange
Park
of Arnold Avenue between 1920 and today.
Overall
, a comparison of the two maps reveals a complete transformation. In the year 1920, the
park
was much more ancient with a large number of rose gardens and ponds for water plants, but over the period, the
park
saw a number of significant changes. The most noticeable is that the fountain that was in the centre of the
park
was replaced by a rose garden with seats surrounding it.
Moreover
, seats which were in the northern-west and southern-west sides of the
park
were demolished to build an amphitheatre for concerts.
In contrast
, only one rose garden on the northern-west side of the
park
remained. The pond for water plants was cleared and converted into a children's play area.
Further
developments included the construction of a water feature which replaced the glasshouse in the southeast of the
park
.
In addition
, another rose garden located in the north of the
park
was knocked down to make a cafe. The final development was in the southern-east of the
park
where seats were replaced by the entrance to the underground car
park
.
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