The chart below shows the result of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the result of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph illustrates the outcomes of a survey about
people
who
are lives
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live
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in
Australia
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Australian
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cities
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city's
cities'
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habit
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habits
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for
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of
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coffee
and
tea
buying and consuming.
Overall
, there are provide five
cities
in Australia. Which are Sydney,
Malborne
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Melbourne
, Brisbane, Adelaide and Hobart.
Moreover
, most of the
people
in
cities
except Adelaide prefer to go to café
for
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to
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consume
a
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apply
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coffee
or
a
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apply
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tea
and
also
all the citizens in
mentioned
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the mentioned
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cities
prefer to have
a
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apply
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fresh
coffee
.
According to
the graph, In
Sydney
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Sydney,
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roughly around 60% of humans preferred
went
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to go
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to
café
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a café
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for
coffee
or
tea
in
last
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the last
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4 weeks.
While fresh
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Fresh
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coffee
consumed
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is consumed
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by
people
approximately 43%.
In addition
,
an
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apply
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instant
coffee
sold
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is sold
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for
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to
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45% of citizens in Sydney.
Further
, the same habit
was happened
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happened
has happened
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in
Melborn
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Melbourne
as well. Among all five
cities
below 45% of
people
bought fresh
coffee
in
last
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the last
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4 weeks.
Moreover
, the
people
of Adelaide have a small
changed
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in
this
graph which was they preferred to consume instant
coffee
1%
higher
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more
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than went to
shop
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the shop
a shop
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and had a
coffee
or
tea
.
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