The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and

amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between

1920 and 2019.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and

make comparisons where relevant.
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The graphs illustrate the differences in the ownership of electrical machines, and the number of
hours
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spent doing
household
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chores in one country between 1920 and 2019.
Overall
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, the
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of households that use electrical devices increased significantly.
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, there was a dramatic decline in the housework time for every
household
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per week over the period. The washing machines were the highest used electrical device in 1920 with 40%. It went up considerably to approximately 73% as the
lowest used
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machine in 2019.
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, People did not use refrigerators in 1920, but from that time, households increased their use of
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fridges sharply to 100% in 1980 to become the most used electrical appliance until the end of the period. Vacuum cleaner began the period with 30% and rocketed up to 100% in 2000 and remained relatively stable until 2019. Every
household
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spent 50
hours
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on housework for a single week in 1920.
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, the advent of new electrical devices made the homework
hours
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drop gradually year after year until it reached 10
hours
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per week for every
household
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in 2019.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, household with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • household appliances
  • time-efficient
  • labour-saving devices
  • technological innovations
  • ownership rate
  • housework chores
  • domestic workload
  • automation
  • advancements
  • trend analysis
  • societal shifts
  • economic impact
  • durability
  • lifespan of appliances
  • maintenance
  • historical comparison
  • time allocation
  • drudgery reduction
  • energy consumption
  • disruption in trends
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