The graph below shows the price of bananas in 4 different countries from 1996 to 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the price of bananas in 4 different countries from 1996 to 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting  the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the price of bananas in four countries between 1996 to 2004 in kilograms.
Overall
, it can be seen from the diagram the price of bananas was the lowest in the United Kingdom of America and the highest was in Japan.
While
Germany and France demonstrated some fluctuation during that period and after it became constant in the final year. It is conspicuous that the sale of Japan and France was $2 per
kilogram
in 1996 after that Japan’s banana rate increased abruptly to $3 in 1998 and after that, it declined significantly hitting at the same rate of $2 per
kilogram
in 1999.
Additionally
, it displayed some oscillations between 1999 to 2004, reaching $2.5 per
kilogram
.
Furthermore
,in France
initially
, the amount hovered till 1998 at $2, after that, it experienced some movements till 2003 and arrived at an initial cost of $2 per
kilogram
and plateaued at $2 in 2004. Probing ahead, the United States of America sold bananas at $2 per
kilogram
from 1996 to 1997, after the rate augmented gently to $1.25,
further
, it did not show any major growth and the payment was the same in 2004.
Moreover
, Germany, sold $1.5
kilogram
in 1996 after it swung and touched $1.75 in 1998, after that it plunged to $1.25 in 1999 and again it augmented to $2 in 2002, which
finally
hit $1.75 in 2003 after that it hovered until 2004.
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