The chart below shows the result of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the result of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph illustrates the outcomes of a survey about consumers'
coffee
and tea purchasing and consuming routines in five
cities
in Australia.
Overall
, they have provided five
cities
in Australia. Which are Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide and Hobart.
Moreover
, most of the
people
in
cities
except Adelaide prefer to go to café to consume
coffee
or tea and
also
all the citizens in the mentioned
cities
prefer to have fresh
coffee
.
According to
the graph, roughly 60% of humans preferred to go to a café for a drink in the
last
4 weeks and Fresh
coffee
is consumed by
people
approximately 43% in Sydney.
In addition
, instant
coffee
is sold to 45% of citizens in the above-mentioned city.
Further
, the same habit happened in Melbourne as well. Among all five
cities
below 45% of
people
bought fresh
coffee
in the
last
4 weeks.
Moreover
, the
people
of Adelaide had a small change in
this
graph which is they preferred to consume instant
coffee
1% more in comparison to
people
who went to the shop and had a
coffee
or tea.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last, moreover".
Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, cities, people with synonyms.
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