You live in a small university town.Last week,you drove to a big city about two hours away to buy a new laptop at a good price.You worked on the laptop all week and finished writing a long assignment that is due shortly.However,this week,the laptop doesn't switch on.Write to the store.In your letter:
Dear Sir/Madam I am writing to complain about the gadget I bought
your
store.First of all,I introduce myself.I live in a small university town.I stay in Change preposition
in your
this
town because it is close to my company.If you remember,I bought a new minicomputer
a week ago.I went the despite the fact that your store is far from my house because I really need a minicomputer
for my work. I mostly use my friend's laptop
.However
,my company has expanded that's why all the workers must have a
own computer.Most of Change the word
their
workers
bought big Add an article
the workers
computer
.But, I prefer Fix the agreement mistake
computers
suitable
Add an article
a suitable
laptop
.Two week
ago,I bought and threw an antivirus on the Change to a plural noun
weeks
laptop
before I used it.I worked on my minicomputer
for a week.The laptop
was fine when I using it.I closed and
put it in my bag after I put Correct pronoun usage
it and
to
use.I did not use it for about two or three days.Correct pronoun usage
it to
First
problem is that my Change the article
The first
micro computer
did not switch on the next day.I am extremely disappointed in it Correct your spelling
microcomputer
due to
the laptop
being a
new. Change the article
apply
At
the beginning, I did not know what to do.Change the preposition
In
Then
, I made up my mind about writing letter
to you. I would like you will replace another Add an article
a letter
minicomputer
.I look forward to your reply and a resolution to my problem. Yours faithfully Komiljonova KomilaxonSubmitted by omondavlat91 on
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logical structure
Ensure paragraphs deal with a single idea; this will improve clarity.
logical structure
Use connectors and linking words for smoother transitions between sentences.
complete response
Address all parts of the task more precisely to improve completeness.
complete response
You provided a clear context and background for your situation.
suitable writing tone
The tone of the letter is polite and respectful.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.