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The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990, 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the man features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990, 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the man features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table gives information about the number of
milk
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 produced by four countries each every decade between 1990 and 2010. It was remarkable that, for the most part,
milk
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 products
growth
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grew
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 an upward trend
while
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milk
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 Australia declined in a downward trend. A closer inspection of the amount illustrates that the total yield of
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the
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Netherlands'
milk
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 production gently declined from 11,262,000
litres
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 in 1990 to 11,155,000
litres
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 in 2000 before rebounding to 11,466,000
litres
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 in 2010.
In contrast
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 , Australia fell by 11,246,000
litres
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 to 9,165,000
litres
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 throughout the period. The trend was mirrored by Tanzania and Guatemala which accounted for approximately 87,000
litres
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 and 26,000
litres
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 in 1990,respectively gradually rising by 78,000
litres
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 and 58,000
litres
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 to 1,550,000
litres
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 and 84,000
litres
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 in 2010, respectively.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words milk, litres with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • annually
  • production
  • trends
  • increased
  • decreased
  • significantly
  • comparatively
  • figures
  • ranking
  • summarize
  • observations
  • patterns
  • consistently
  • growth
  • decline
  • noticeable
  • highlight
  • emphasize
  • yearly
  • countries
  • data
  • support
  • insights
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