Nowadays, the question of changing financial support to another type of help
to
poorer Change preposition
for
countries
from wealthy ones become a field for Use synonyms
debates
, because today's measures are not helping Fix the agreement mistake
debate
for solving
poverty. I, personally, can strongly agree with the idea of replacing existing ways Change preposition
to solve
to
more effective strategies in terms of providing Change preposition
with
sustanable
economics Correct your spelling
sustainable
of
Change preposition
for
third world
Add a hyphen
third-world
countries
and limited Use synonyms
recources
.
To really improve the current situation the best decision is to make a long-lasting strategy, that will offer a poorer country an Correct your spelling
resources
oppotunity
to become fully independent one day. Correct your spelling
opportunity
Firstly
, there is a need to find Linking Words
country's
own Correct article usage
a country's
resorces
, that can help to build Correct your spelling
resources
strong
economy. It could be minerals, fertile soil or even Add an article
a strong
a
tourism. Remove the article
apply
For instance
, OAE was Linking Words
also
in Linking Words
a
misery before there was found a local oil field. Remove the article
apply
Secondly
, it is necessary to Linking Words
learn
people how to maintain these resources and send professionals, who could teach them.
Another reason to change the way of treatment Verb problem
teach
to
those Change preposition
in
countries
is that sending financial aid is Use synonyms
also
harmful Linking Words
for
Change the preposition
to
giving
side. Correct article usage
the giving
Although
, Linking Words
another types
of help could be more expensive, Replace the adjective
another type
other types
but
they are Remove the conjunction
apply
also
more productive. Linking Words
Linking Words
Further more
, in 10 years the country Correct your spelling
Furthermore
would
be stable and you will not need to send money again. Wrong verb form
will
The
great example is Bali, in the Correct article usage
A
last
decade Linking Words
this
island has decreased the level of poverty through Linking Words
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a sucessfull
sucessfull
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successful
touristic
Replace the word
tourism
campaign
.
In conclusion, I can't agree with the statement about keeping international politics at the same spot and not providing Fix the agreement mistake
campaigns
another opportunities
to Replace the adjective
another opportunity
other opportunities
fulfilled
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fulfil
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the economical
economical
starvation of poor Replace the word
economic
countries
.Use synonyms
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