The bar chart shows the divorce rates in two European countries from 2011 to 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The given bar chart depicts the

divorce

rates in

Finland

and

Swedan

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Sweden

over a period of 5 years. In the

year

2011, almost 40 % of people divorced in

Finland

and more than 40% of couples separated in Sweden. In the following

year

,

Finland

exhibited a small decrease in

divorce

rates,

however

from the

year

2013 to 2015, more individuals started seeking

divorce

. In the

year

2015

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the

divorce

rate in

Finland

climbed to more than 40%.

On the other hand

,

Swedan

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Sweden

displayed more than 50% separation rates in the

year

2011,

however

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has reduced to less than 40% in the

year

2015. Alike

Swedan

the trend

has

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changed in the

year

2012,

where

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the

divorce

rate

has

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soared up to 50 % and

gradullay

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gradually

decreased in the following years

and

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has

become

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the country with

least

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number of divorces among

Swedan

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Swedes

and

finland

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by 2015.

Through out

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the

years

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no country has crossed the 50% margin, even though

Swedan

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Sweden

has escalated to more than 45% in the

year

2012.