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The chart and table below show customer satisfaction levels in the US with airlines and aspects of air travel in 1999, 2000 and 2007.

The chart and table below show customer satisfaction levels in the US with airlines and aspects of air travel in 1999, 2000 and 2007.
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The diagram depicts the rate of
satisfaction
 from customer to airline and the table illustrates the
satisfaction
 aspects of flying experiences in 1999, 2000, and 2007 in the United States of America. As can be seen, the level of
satisfaction
 with air travel slightly increased and the high polls of specific aspects of experience flight
was
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 courtesy of flight attendance. First and foremost, the
satisfaction
 of airlines gradually
increase
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increased
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stood
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 was 65% in 1999. It was followed by 2000 at 69% and 72% in 2007.
In contrast
, every year
was
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occurred
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a minimal decrease at 32% in 1999. After that, there was a slight decline to 29% in 2000 and the leveling of dissatisfaction in 2007 around 24%.
Subsequently
, there were several major
of
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customer
satisfaction
 based on the polling, which was measured by percentage. The courtesy of flight attendants was a rank first and
significant
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increasing
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increased
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 from
at
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88% in 1999 to 92% in 2007 and
also
 the price of tickets from 45 in 1999 to 65 in 2007. Meanwhile, there
were
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was
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a
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stable growth consisting of
check-in
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check-ins
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 that
reach
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reached
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 a peak in 2000 at 89 but it
was occurred
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occurred
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 minimal decreasing to 88 in 2007 and the schedules stood
at
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from
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 75 in 1999 to 79 in 2007.
In addition
, the comfort of seats was not included in the polling in 1999 and 2000 but in 2007 it was already included and stood at 47.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words satisfaction with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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