The maps below show a science park in 2008 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show a science park in 2008 and the same park today.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps illustrate the developments which took place in the science
park
between 2008 and today.
Overall
, a comparison of the two maps reveals a complete transformation from a largely rural to a mainly urban area. In 2008, the
park
was a much greener rural area with a large number of grassland, but during the next 16 years, the
park
saw a number of significant changes. The most noticeable is that the grassland in the northwest of the
park
was cut down to build a research and development
centre
.
Moreover
, the reception which was next to the offices was replaced by the University Hub.
In contrast
, a cycle path appeared from the woodland crossing the
centre
of the
park
and running directly to the north.
Further
developments were the extension of the cyber security in the
centre
of the
park
where the grassland was. Meanwhile, the IT
centre
was knocked down to construct an innovation
centre
. The final change was in the south of the
park
where the station disappeared.
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