The chart below shows the percentage of a drug company’s total sales, by region, from 2002 to 2006.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The chart below shows the percentage of a drug company’s total sales, by region, from 2002 to 2006.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The given column chart illustrates the drug company's total sales percentages by region in the period of 5 years from 2002 to 2006.
Overall
,
while
the
percentage
of
America
and Europe saw a downward
trend
, Asia tended to increase.
Besides
,
America
reached the highest point in 2002 through all the years surveyed. In
America
, the
percentage
of
America
was the highest point at 41% in 2002, but the
percentage
of
America
decreased to 27% in 2004.
Then
, it had been upstairs next year since 2004 with 29% and 30% in 2006. For Europe, the column has a downward
trend
, in 2002 the
percentage
of
this
year was 34%, between 2002 to 2004, it had an
upstairs
Correct word choice
upward
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trend
but from 2004 to 2006, the
percentage
of Europe has decreased, 34% and 30% in 2005 and 2006. In Asia, the
percentage
in
Change preposition
of
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this
is different. The
percentage
in Asia has an upward
trend
, in 2002 the column is the shortest in
a
Correct article usage
the
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group with 25% but it tends to increase. From 2003 to 2006, it has upstairs 10%.
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