The diagram below shows the process of growing and preparing pineapples and pineapple products. Write at least 150 words
The given diagram highlights the different stages involved in the cultivation of
pineapples
and their final products.
From an overall
perspective, the process included two main steps: growing pineapples
and preparing its output for customers. As we can see, almost all activities require both human care and auspicious weather conditions.
Firstly
, the farmers have to plant the pineapples
, which offers various rules, such
as the distance from each one must be 26 centimeters
and the Change the spelling
centimetres
favorable
temperature is between 28 and 30 degrees Celsius. The Change the spelling
favourable
pineapples
took about 12 months before reaching their standard height (30cm) and weight (2 kg). After being picked up from the fields, they are transported to the factories for the next categories.
Subsequently
, the pineapples
are deep cleaned in purified water to wash off all the chemicals, then
categorized depending on their quality. The smallest ones are used to Correct word choice
and then
making
juices after cutting off the tops and going through an extractor. Wrong verb form
make
While
the rinds of medium-sized pineapples
are peeled, these pineapples
are sliced into small pieces. Then
packing in a tin jar and
intended for canning. The largest ones are waxed again for sterilization, Correct word choice
apply
then
prepared in a box made of wood, which is shipped to consumers and sellers as fresh fruit.Submitted by dohuyhoang on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words pineapples with synonyms.
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