The bar chart below shows the sector contributions to India’s gross domestic product from 1960 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the sector contributions to India’s gross domestic product from 1960 to 2000.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph compares the sector contributions to the gross domestic product of India between 1960 and 2000.
Overall
,
firstly
the figure for
Agriculture
was high proportion and
then
, passed the time
industry
and
services
increased than before.
To begin
, in 1960,
agriculture
was almost 65 %, which occupies a large part, but
Industry
and
services
accounted for 17 % and 18 %, respectively. Afterwards, in 1970,
agriculture
decreased to around 55 %, but the other two rose to around 21% and 23 %, in turn. In 1980,
agriculture
fell by nearly 45 %.
Industry
and
Services
are increased approximately 25 % and 28 %, respectively. By 1990 year,
services
had risen, the
industry
had
also
increased compared to before, but
agriculture
had doubled over almost 1960 years. In the year 2000,
agriculture
dropped by around 15 %, but
services
rose the pick of
this
year, and
also
industry
rose by nearly 25 %.
In addition
, the
services
have exceeded
agriculture
twice as much in recent years.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Replace the words agriculture, industry, services with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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