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The charts below give irformation about the price of tickets on one airline between Sydney and Melbourne, Australia, over ra two-week period in 2013.

The charts below give irformation about the price of tickets on one airline between Sydney and Melbourne, Australia, over ra two-week period in 2013.
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The graph below demonstrates the information about the prices of tickets of the airline between
Sydney
 and
Melbourne
 for
two
Correct determiner usage
a
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week
Correct your spelling
two-week
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 period in 2013.
Overall
,
this
 graph shows
Correct article usage
a comparision
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comparision
Correct your spelling
comparison
 of prices for
week
 1 and
week
 2 between
Sydney
 to
Melbourne
 and for
Melbourne
 to
Sydney
 which briefly
show
Correct subject-verb agreement
shows
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 the
price
 difference
with
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apply
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for seven days of the
week
. To Commence with that from
Sydney
 to
Melbourne
had
Verb problem
was
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 more
price as
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expensive
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comapare
Correct your spelling
compared
compare
 to the return flight from
Melbourne
 to
Sydney
. As we can see
that
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apply
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week
 1 of
Sydney
 to
Melbourne
 had high
price
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prices
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 on Monday,
Friday
 and Saturday which is 70$ or above but not maximum
then
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than
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 80$. For
week
 two the
monday
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Monday
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 had become
more
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apply
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cheaper as
compare
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compared
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 to
Friday
 and Saturday.
Furthermore
, from
Melbourne
 to
Sydney
 had cheap
price
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prices
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 weather it
come
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comes
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 to weekends it
has
Verb problem
was
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 seen that the
price
 was only high on
friday
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Friday
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 but
other
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on other
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day
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days
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 in the
week
 was less than 60$ and it was
also
 seen that the
price
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prices
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 were similar on Tuesday, Wednesday and Thursday.
Lastlty
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Lastly
,
price
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prices
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 on
friday
Change the capitalization
Friday
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 were higher
as
Change preposition
apply
show examples
comapre
Correct your spelling
compared
compare
 to
Sydney
 to
Melbourne
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sydney, melbourne, week, price, friday with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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