The map shows the town of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The map
beneath
illustrates how the village named Stokeford has developed during the Rephrase
below
last
80 years.There have been several changes, the most noticeable being the shops were demolished also
as farmlands, whereas
primary school
and retirement Fix the agreement mistake
schools
home
had multiple coins in their structure.
In 1930 Fix the agreement mistake
homes
on
the Change preposition
in
north west
of the village there Correct your spelling
northwest
was
two more shops than it is today.On the other side of the road was the primary school which stayed in front of the ever existing farmland.Change the verb form
were
Therefore
the garden, which included to
Change preposition
apply
itself
a number of trees,occupied a large area and surrounded the house.Correct pronoun usage
apply
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