You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The changes in ownership of electrical items and the concrete of time took to make housework in households in a rival given certain periods between 1920 and 2019 were shown in those pictures.
Overall
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, it is clear from the chart that, the
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of refrigerators was the maximum
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the total of washing machines was the minimum over the given periods.
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, the hours each week decreased between 1920 and 2019.
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the percentage of households with electrical appliances table , the refrigerator started at 0 and jumped by 100. In comparison, the washing machine was the highest in 1920 so it rose to 60
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it had little decline between 1960 and 1980. The
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of vacuum cleaners was lower than the
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of refrigerators between 1940 and 2000,
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,
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this
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, they kept the same amount
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.
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, the hours per week had decreased,
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, it began from 50 and decreased to 10 in special periods. But , in 1980 and 2000
this
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stayed stable.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number with synonyms.
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