You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graphs below show current rates of secondary and higher education among people in various parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graphs below show current rates of secondary and higher education among people in

various parts of the world.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make

comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
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This
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illustrates the current number of secondary and higher education students in various parts of the world.
To begin
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, it is seen from the
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that Europe is considered to be the highest region in both adult and school-aged populations.
For instance
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, nearly 90 per cent of the male population and 100 per cent of the female population are in school .
On the other hand
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, the lowest percentage of secondary and higher education is in the SAA region, with no more than 30 per cent in both graphs.
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, it is clearly viewed from the
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that both Latin America and East Asia are fairly similar in population numbers.
to conclude
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, the
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explains that the European region is very developed with their education as they have the highest percentage rate across all regions.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words graph with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • trends
  • disparities
  • secondary education
  • higher education
  • rates
  • regions
  • significant
  • analysis
  • comparisons
  • economic conditions
  • social conditions
  • political conditions
  • highlighting
  • notable gap
  • observed
  • surprising findings
  • affirming
  • overview
  • illustrate
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