You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graphs below show current rates of secondary and higher education among people in various parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

the two presented bar charts compare the current proportion of adult and

school aged

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school-aged

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population

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populations

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in different parts of the world( Europe, SSA, Latin

Amercia

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America

and East Asia)

f or

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for

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males and females.

overall

, the percentage of

school-aged

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the school-aged

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population is almost more than

adult

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adults

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for both males and females except

the

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for the

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male category in SSA.

while

in Europe the percentage of people who are

in

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apply

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school-aged in both men and women sections are over twice as high as

adult

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adults

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.

According to

the first figure, in East

Asia

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Asia,

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the number of men is more than women ( more than 45% and less than 45%, respectively).

in contrast

, in three other

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areas

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area

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area,

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the numbers of women are more than men. and

also

the SSA stands in the fourth(

last

) place with almost 10% and 20% for

male

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males

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and

female

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females

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, respectively).

In addition

to

second

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the second

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chart the number of

female

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females

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in

europe

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Europe

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is more than

male

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males

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.

whereas

, for three other

region

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regions

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the number of

male

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males

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is more than

female

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females

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.