You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graphs below show current rates of secondary and higher education among people in various parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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the two presented bar charts compare the current proportion of adult and
school aged
Add a hyphen
school-aged
population
in different parts of the world( Europe, SSA, Latin Fix the agreement mistake
populations
Amercia
and East Asia)Correct your spelling
America
f or
males and females.
Correct your spelling
for
overall
, the percentage of school-aged
population is almost more than Add an article
the school-aged
adult
for both males and females except Fix the agreement mistake
adults
the
male category in SSA. Change preposition
for the
while
in Europe the percentage of people who are in
school-aged in both men and women sections are over twice as high as Change preposition
apply
adult
.
Fix the agreement mistake
adults
According to
the first figure, in East Asia
the number of men is more than women ( more than 45% and less than 45%, respectively). Add a comma
Asia,
in contrast
, in three other Change to a plural noun
areas
area
the numbers of women are more than men. and Add a comma
area,
also
the SSA stands in the fourth( last
) place with almost 10% and 20% for male
and Fix the agreement mistake
males
female
, respectively). Fix the agreement mistake
females
In addition
to second
chart the number of Correct article usage
the second
female
in Change to a plural noun
females
europe
is more than Change the capitalization
Europe
male
. Fix the agreement mistake
males
whereas
, for three other region
the number of Change to a plural noun
regions
male
is more than Change to a plural noun
males
female
.Fix the agreement mistake
females
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