The chart below shows the results of a European survey into young people’s expectations for change in five different areas of life in the next 20 years. They were asked if they thought things would improve or get worse. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
chart views the various results that were conducted by a European survey into the expectations for the change in five different areas of young people
's life
in the next 20 years.
Fix the agreement mistake
lives
To begin
, approximately 54 per cent
of young people
have a strong belief that communication between people
will change. On the other hand
, the other 46 per cent
don't see communication between people
changing in the next 20 years.
Moreover
, the quality of food is also
predicted by 49 per cent
of the population to change, unfortunately, 60 per cent
of the population expected that water will get worse and 70 per cent
expect the quality of air in cities to get worse.
from the graph, we can conclude that the three major changes that could happen in the next twenty years are the communication between people
, the quality of water and the healthSubmitted by Rneem on
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