The graphs show changes in spending habits of people in UK between 1971 and 2001. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.
A closer examination reveals a significant change in food expenditures over
this
period
. In 1971, food consumption accounted for 44% of daily expenses, which is nearly half of the total. However
, this
figure declined significantly by the end of the period
, approaching a minority share. In contrast
, car usage among UK citizens began at over 20% and doubled by 2001.
Additionally
, dining out at restaurants also
experienced growth. Starting at 7% in the early years, restaurant spending had doubled by the end of the period
. For furniture and petrol, initial expenditures were at 9% and 10%, respectively; however
, both categories saw a slight decrease by 2001. Interestingly, spending on books fell sharply from 6% to just 1% in the final year.
Overall
, these changes illustrate a dramatic shift in food consumption patterns. Meanwhile, car usage increased significantly, while
spending on books saw a notable decline by the end of the period
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