Despite a large number of gyms, a sedentary lifestyle is gaining popularity in the contemporary world. What problems are associated with this? What solutions can you suggest?
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lifestyle
. Use synonyms
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lifestyle
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decline
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activity
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activities
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for
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tax
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on
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business
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businesses
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people
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cause
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caused
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business
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the business
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clubs
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expenditure
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expenditures
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solve
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for
member
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members
promotion
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promotions
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sedentary
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a sedentary
lifestyle
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is become
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becomes
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problem
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need
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needs
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apply
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problem
with clear Use synonyms
solution
should the Fix the agreement mistake
solutions
government
and the entrepreneur be willing to try them.Use synonyms
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