The tow maps illustrate the internal changes that occurred to the layout and the functions of the facilities in a library from 2002 until the present day.
The maps explain the internal developments in the design and the roles of the amenities in a library from 2002 to the modern day .
Overall
, it can be seen that the library has become modern , with far more buildings Linking Words
such
as hotels ,restaurants and parks .
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To begin
with , in 2002 , there was a concert hall in front of A venue which remained at its site .On the left and right sides, there were car parks which were demolished into a theatre and hotel/ restaurant. Linking Words
Furthermore
, next to the car Linking Words
park
there was a shopping centre which is Use synonyms
also
located at the same location.
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Moreover
, in 2002 , next to the B venue there was a council office which was changed to an open Linking Words
park
, underground Use synonyms
park
and car Use synonyms
park
. Use synonyms
Additionally
,to the left of the council office , there was a book reading area called a library which changed to an exhibition hall in 2024 . Linking Words
Finally
, the exhibition hall now has become a council office .Linking Words
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words park with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
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