The map displays the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The map displays the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
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The two maps give information about the comparison of the village of
Ryemouth
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Tynemouth
development in the years 1995 and its current time.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that there have been major improvements in the village of
Ryemouth
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Tynemouth
.
However
,
some
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in some
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housing states, the main roads, a hotel and a cafe have remained unchanged. In 1995, In the south of the
map
, there was a fishing port that was the place for several boats.
Then
, the fish market and cafe emerged along the beach. The main roads were constructed above the coastline across from west to east,
while
other roads from northwest to southeast.
Additionally
, there were several shops opposite the fish market and one hotel was available exactly to the right of the junction. Several housing states were developed in the northwest of the
map
. Interestingly, natural green spaces including the forest park and farmland existed in the west of the
map
. Looking at the
map
in more detail, the fishing port has been demolished, whilst shops and fish markets have been replaced by restaurants and apartments, consecutively. A new car park has been added beside the hotel and one road has been extended in the housing state areas. Notably, the forest park and farmland have changed into sports facilities including a golf field and two tennis courts.
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