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The table below shows the number of temporary migrant worker in four countries in 2003 and 2006 and the number of these workers per 1,000 people in these countries in 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the number of temporary migrant worker in four countries in 2003 and 2006 and the number of these workers per 1,000 people in these countries in 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given table illustrates the number of temporary migrant
workers
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 between 2003 and 2006, and these
workers
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 per 1,000 people in the
last
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 year -2006.
Overall
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, there are four countries including New
Zealand
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, the United Kingdom,
Australia
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, and the United States. The
workers
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 in the USA reached the peak in
this
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 table. In another category, New
Zealand
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 got the highest point in
'per
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the 'per
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 1,000 people 2006' column. In the first year of the
servey
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survey
, the United States of America was the place which had the most
emplyers
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employees
 approximately 577,000.
Australia
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 and the UK reached respectively 152,000 and 137,000. New
Zealand
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 was the lowest around 65,000. After three years, the USA
rose
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has
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 more than 100,000
number of
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apply
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workers
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 and still
get
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has
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 the highest among these countries.
Then
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 was the UK,
Australia
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 and the latest was New
Zealand
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.
Difference
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Differences
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with
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between
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two
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the two
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 columns were mentioned. The 'per 1,000 people 2006' showed that New
Zealand
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 got the top, which was 21,1.
Australia
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 and the United Kingdom
was
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were
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repectively
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respectively
 10,7 and 4,4.
By contrast
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, the USA got the lowest point around 2,3.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words workers, zealand, australia with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • temporary migrant workers
  • trends
  • absolute numbers
  • per 1,000 people
  • growth rate
  • per capita
  • labor markets
  • economies
  • significant
  • imply
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