The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph demonstrates the step-by-step stages of producing
sugar
from canes
.
Overall
, the process is 7 stages, man-made and linear process which begins with growing sugar
canes
in fields and ends with drying and cooling sugar
crystals.
The initial step is to wait for approximately 12 to 18 months for canes
to grow. After they are grown, they are harvested either by manual labour or by a machinery truck, and they are both used to cut canes
and remove leaves from the stems. The subsequent step is to place stems in a crusher machine which is used to crush the stems and extract juice from them.
Following that, the extracted juice is purified through a limestone filter. After that, it is heated until it evaporates and becomes syrup. Then
, sugar
crystals are separated from the syrup by using a centrifuge before they are dried and cooled in a big can.Submitted by sam on
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