The charts below show the performance of a bus company in terms of punctuality, both actual and target (what actually happened compared to what the company was trying to achieve), and the number of complaints from passengers.
The given bar charts show how frequently the buses from a specific
company
arrive on time for both their achievement and desired Use synonyms
target
, Use synonyms
then
give information about the number of customers complaints between 1999 and 2003.
From an Linking Words
overall
perspective, the Linking Words
company
lowered its Use synonyms
target
for arriving on time over the years, Use synonyms
however
, it failed to meet the expectations, but 2003. Significantly, the Linking Words
company
received more complaints throughout the studied period.
In the first two years, though the bus Use synonyms
company
aimed for 86% of buses arriving on time, it actually reached 85% of that Use synonyms
target
, Use synonyms
then
bottomed at roughly 82% in 2000. In the same Linking Words
year
, Use synonyms
it
was an enormous gap of 3% between the Correct pronoun usage
there
target
that they set and the real result they created. After declining rapidly, the bus's punctuality started rising gradually in the next two years, staying well above 84%. Eventually, in 2003, the Use synonyms
company
broke its Use synonyms
target
by 2%Use synonyms
,
and served their customers with the same rates of on-time service compared with that of 1999.
In terms of negative Remove the comma
apply
feedbacks
from passengers, the Fix the agreement mistake
feedback
year
1999 received the smallest amount with approximately 70 out of 1000 passenger journeys before gradually climbing to reach 120 in the final Use synonyms
year
of the period, in spite of the fluctuation in 2001. Notably, the Use synonyms
company
succeeded in raising the percentage of on-time trips in 2003, Use synonyms
this
Linking Words
year
came first with the highest level of complaints.Use synonyms
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