The charts below show the performance of a bus company in terms of punctuality, both actual and target (what actually happened compared to what the company was trying to achieve), and the number of complaints from passengers.
The given bar charts show how frequently the buses from a specific
company
arrive on time for both their achievement and desired target
, then
give information about the number of customers complaints between 1999 and 2003.
From an overall
perspective, the company
lowered its target
for arriving on time over the years, however
, it failed to meet the expectations, but 2003. Significantly, the company
received more complaints throughout the studied period.
In the first two years, though the bus company
aimed for 86% of buses arriving on time, it actually reached 85% of that target
, then
bottomed at roughly 82% in 2000. In the same year
, it
was an enormous gap of 3% between the Correct pronoun usage
there
target
that they set and the real result they created. After declining rapidly, the bus's punctuality started rising gradually in the next two years, staying well above 84%. Eventually, in 2003, the company
broke its target
by 2%,
and served their customers with the same rates of on-time service compared with that of 1999.
In terms of negative Remove the comma
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year
1999 received the smallest amount with approximately 70 out of 1000 passenger journeys before gradually climbing to reach 120 in the final year
of the period, in spite of the fluctuation in 2001. Notably, the company
succeeded in raising the percentage of on-time trips in 2003, this
year
came first with the highest level of complaints.Submitted by anhduong.mth0102 on
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