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The line graphs illustrate the changes in having electrical devices and the time wasted doing housework in households in a country from 1920 to 2019.

The line graphs illustrate the changes in having electrical devices and the time wasted doing housework in households in a country from 1920 to 2019.
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The line graphs illustrate the changes in having washing
machines
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, refrigerators, and
vacuum
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cleaners
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 in
households
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 and the time wasted doing housework in
households
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 in a country from 1920 to 2019.
Overall
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, the ownership of electrical devices in
households
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 experienced an upward trend
while
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 spending hours of housework showed a significant decrease. In 1920, ownership of washing
machines
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 and
vacuum
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cleaners
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 in
households
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 was %40 and %30 respectively
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 the figure for fridges was almost %0. The percentages of refrigerators and
vacuum
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cleaners
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 increased sharply until they reached %90. In the meantime, having refrigerators and
vacuum
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cleaners
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 exceeded having washing
machines
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 in
households
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 in 1940 and 1960 respectively. After 1980 every household had fridges until 2019 and the figure for
vacuum
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cleaners
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 reached %100 in 2000 and it remained steady until 2019. The ownership of washing
machines
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 reached the highest point increasing in 1960 and
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 it reversed until 1980. After 1980 it showed a slight rise to %75 in 2019. The amount of time spent doing housework in
households
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 experienced a downward trend until 1980. It continued steadily until 2000.
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 the number fell from 15 to 10
at the end
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 of the period.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 86%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words machines, vacuum, cleaners, households with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "illustrate" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
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