The line graphs illustrate the changes in having electrical devices and the time wasted doing housework in households in a country from 1920 to 2019.

The line graphs illustrate the changes in having electrical devices and the time wasted doing housework in households in a country from 1920 to 2019.
The line graphs illustrate the changes in having washing
machines
, refrigerators, and
vacuum
cleaners
in
households
and the time wasted doing housework in
households
in a country from 1920 to 2019.
Overall
, the ownership of electrical devices in
households
experienced an upward trend
while
spending hours of housework showed a significant decrease. In 1920, ownership of washing
machines
and
vacuum
cleaners
in
households
was %40 and %30 respectively
while
the figure for fridges was almost %0. The percentages of refrigerators and
vacuum
cleaners
increased sharply until they reached %90. In the meantime, having refrigerators and
vacuum
cleaners
exceeded having washing
machines
in
households
in 1940 and 1960 respectively. After 1980 every household had fridges until 2019 and the figure for
vacuum
cleaners
also
reached %100 in 2000 and it remained steady until 2019. The ownership of washing
machines
reached the highest point increasing in 1960 and
then
it reversed until 1980. After 1980 it showed a slight rise to %75 in 2019. The amount of time spent doing housework in
households
experienced a downward trend until 1980. It continued steadily until 2000.
Then
the number fell from 15 to 10
at the end
of the period.
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