The two pie charts below show total world energy consumption and electricity generation for last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two pie charts below show total world energy consumption and electricity generation for last year.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two presented pie charts compare
the
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global
energy
usage and electricity production in the previous year.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that fossil fuels were the biggest part of the
world
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energy
utilization and electric
power
production for the
last
year. Oil was the largest part of the
power
consumption, a little more than a third of the total
power
usage.
Whereas
it was relatively small, just under 7%, in the electricity generation chart. Coal was consumed less than oil, about a quarter of the whole utilization, but nearly 40% of electric
power
was produced by it. Nuclear and hydro sources were only a minority in
power
usage, but they made approximately 16% each of the electricity generation for the previous year,
while
gas produced slightly more - just under 20% of electric
power
. About the same percentage of gas was spent on
energy
. Renewable
energy
and waste were around a tenth of the global consumption chart.
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