You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The given image depicts the
steps
involved in recycling
plastic
bottles
.
Overall
, the process involves 9
steps
beginning with collecting the
bottles
to producing products like boxes, clothes and stationary
materials
. As a first step collecting
plastic
bottles
and transporting them to the recycling centre through a heavy vehicle, where the
plastic
segregation takes place and unwanted
materials
are discarded.
Then
the sorted
materials
are compressed into big blocks and put into crushing machines to produce fine-grained minute particles which are
then
washed in a heavy container with water to remove the dirt. Following these next
steps
, a machine is involved where minute
plastic
materials
go as an input and pellets are produced which are
then
heated to form a raw material. Post to
this
process all the raw
materials
will be collected in one place to produce by-products like
bottles
, boxes, clothes, bags and stationary
materials
. These
steps
are
then
repeated
over
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as a cyclic process.
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