The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given image depicts the
steps
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involved in recycling
plastic
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bottles
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.
Overall
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, the process involves 9
steps
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beginning with collecting the
bottles
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to producing products like boxes, clothes and stationary
materials
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. As a first step collecting
plastic
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bottles
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and transporting them to the recycling centre through a heavy vehicle, where the
plastic
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segregation takes place and unwanted
materials
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are discarded.
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the sorted
materials
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are compressed into big blocks and put into crushing machines to produce fine-grained minute particles which are
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washed in a heavy container with water to remove the dirt. Following these next
steps
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, a machine is involved where minute
plastic
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materials
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go as an input and pellets are produced which are
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heated to form a raw material. Post to
this
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process all the raw
materials
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will be collected in one place to produce by-products like
bottles
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, boxes, clothes, bags and stationary
materials
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. These
steps
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are
then
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repeated
over
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as a cyclic process.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words steps, plastic, bottles, materials with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Recycling process
  • Plastic bottles
  • Waste management
  • Environmental protection
  • Collection
  • Recycling bins
  • Transportation
  • Recycling facilities
  • Sorting
  • Contaminants
  • Shredding
  • Melting
  • Raw material
  • Molding
  • Distribution
  • Circular nature
  • Sustainability
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