The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given image depicts the
steps
involved in recycling Use synonyms
plastic
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bottles
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Overall
, the process involves 9 Linking Words
steps
beginning with collecting the Use synonyms
bottles
to producing products like boxes, clothes and stationary Use synonyms
materials
.
As a first step collecting Use synonyms
plastic
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bottles
and transporting them to the recycling centre through a heavy vehicle, where the Use synonyms
plastic
segregation takes place and unwanted Use synonyms
materials
are discarded. Use synonyms
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the sorted Linking Words
materials
are compressed into big blocks and put into crushing machines to produce fine-grained minute particles which are Use synonyms
then
washed in a heavy container with water to remove the dirt.
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steps
, a machine is involved where minute Use synonyms
plastic
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materials
go as an input and pellets are produced which are Use synonyms
then
heated to form a raw material. Post to Linking Words
this
process all the raw Linking Words
materials
will be collected in one place to produce by-products like Use synonyms
bottles
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materials
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then
repeated Linking Words
over
as a cyclic process.Change preposition
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