The line graph shows the percentages of Australian export with four countries. The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012

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export

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rate

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in Australia to other four

counteries

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countries

like Japan, the US, China and India between the

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1990 to 2012. In the beginning, Japan had

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a major role in 1990 at the

rate

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of 27% and

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with

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downfall to 20%, over

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the

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slight

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fall happened.

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, China

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low

export

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rate

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of 2% and gradually increased by the

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of time and reached 30%

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of

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2012. The US

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a moderate flow

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in

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like 12% in 1990 and ended with 7% in 2012. India

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the

export

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quality

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from 2% to 6%

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and had a peak of approx 8% in 2012. Comparing all four countries, China has

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most

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accelerate

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of time and

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with

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higher percentage

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of

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reported from Australia.