The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the informationby selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured.

Summarise the informationby selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram illustrates the procedures for making instant
noodles
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in the
factory
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. Looking from an
overall
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perspective, it is readily apparent that the process of producing instant
noodles
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is completely automated and no human is involved.
Also
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, it is made of eight main stages. The main ingredient for making
noodles
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is flour, which is stored in storage silos. In the beginning, the flour is mixed with water and oil and the mixture passes through rollers to create a flat material called
dough
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sheets for the next
stage
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.
Next,
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the
dough
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sheets became
dough
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strips in the
factory
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. Before the
dough
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strips go for cooking, they should become
noodles
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discs in
stage
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five. At
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stage
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, noodle discs are cooked with oil and
then
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dried. The cooked
noodles
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are put in cups in the
factory
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and sent for the next
stage
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. There are no other ingredients in
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step,
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, the
factory
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adds vegetables and spices to the cup, and
then
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, in the final
stage
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, they are labelled and sealed. The outcome is instant
noodles
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are ready for sale.
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