The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the informationby selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the procedures for making instant
noodles
in the factory
.
Looking from an overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that the process of producing instant noodles
is completely automated and no human is involved. Also
, it is made of eight main stages.
The main ingredient for making noodles
is flour, which is stored in storage silos. In the beginning, the flour is mixed with water and oil and the mixture passes through rollers to create a flat material called dough
sheets for the next stage
. Next,
the dough
sheets became dough
strips in the factory
. Before the dough
strips go for cooking, they should become noodles
discs in stage
five.
At this
stage
, noodle discs are cooked with oil and then
dried. The cooked noodles
are put in cups in the factory
and sent for the next stage
. There are no other ingredients in this
step, thus
, the factory
adds vegetables and spices to the cup, and then
, in the final stage
, they are labelled and sealed. The outcome is instant noodles
are ready for sale.Submitted by amir1375.6 on
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