The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the informationby selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured.

Summarise the informationby selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the procedures for making instant
noodles
in the
factory
. Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that the process of producing instant
noodles
is completely automated and no human is involved.
Also
, it is made of eight main stages. The main ingredient for making
noodles
is flour, which is stored in storage silos. In the beginning, the flour is mixed with water and oil and the mixture passes through rollers to create a flat material called
dough
sheets for the next
stage
.
Next,
the
dough
sheets became
dough
strips in the
factory
. Before the
dough
strips go for cooking, they should become
noodles
discs in
stage
five. At
this
stage
, noodle discs are cooked with oil and
then
dried. The cooked
noodles
are put in cups in the
factory
and sent for the next
stage
. There are no other ingredients in
this
step,
thus
, the
factory
adds vegetables and spices to the cup, and
then
, in the final
stage
, they are labelled and sealed. The outcome is instant
noodles
are ready for sale.
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