The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
the charts below give information in percentage about the
student's destinations
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who graduated from a university in Anthropology and
also
the salaries of those working in various types of jobs over five years.
Overall
, it is evident from the pie chart that 52% of the graduated pupils were hired for full-time jobs and 12% of them were not capable of becoming employees.
Additionally
, it is apparent from the bar chart that 50% of those employees who worked in the
government
sector had a noticeable chance to earn more than 100,000
dollars
over 5 years of experience. The portion of job destinations referred to educatees shows that
,
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most of them were capable of working as full-time employees. 15% of them allocated their time as part-time
while
only 8% of them as full-time postgrad students.
Furthermore
, only 5% of total scholars were hired as part-time plus postgrad students. In spite of these numbers and statistics, only 8% of them were unaware of their destination. For the three professions of The freelancer consultants, The
government
sectors and The private
companies
, The private
companies
frequently had a higher number of and their wages were nearly 25 to 74 thousand
dollars
over
this
time.
However
,
this
trend changed drastically from a salary of 75 thousand
dollars
to more than 100K. The fraction of jobholders who earned 75 to 100 thousand
dollars
wage over
this
period was 40%, 30% and 25% respectively for The freelancers, The
government
sector and The private
companies
.
However
,
this
ratio fluctuated again for these three models of employment considering the salary of $100K and above that. The numbers stayed steady at 40% for the freelancers, surged by 20% for the
government
sector to reach 50% and escalated by 5% for the private
companies
to reach 30%
at the end
.
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