The bar chart shows the divorce rates in two European countries from 2011 to 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The chart above displays the
divorce
rates
in two European countries ( Finland
and Sweden
) between 2011 and 2015 .
Overall
, the divorce
rate
reached its peak in Sweden
in 2012 , then
started to fall down gradually . however
, Finland
's figures showed the lowest rate
in the same year .
On one hand , Finland
's divorce
rate
was nearly 40% in 2011 .Then
the rates
declined to roughly 30% in the next year . afterward, the country's rates
started to grow rapidly reaching just over 40% in 2014 and continued to ascend in 2015 as well .
On the other hand
, in 2011 the divorce
rate
in Sweden
was just over 40%, then
ascended dramatically to almost 50% the next year . subsequently
, divorce
rates
witnessed a gradual decrease till they reached just over then
under 40% in 2014 and 2015 respectively.
To conclude
, the divorce
rate
fluctuated in Finland
and showed an increase in numbers , While
in Sweden
, the figures showed a slight decrease in proportions .Submitted by hindgadeem123 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words divorce, rates, finland, sweden, rate with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 3 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 3 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
▼