The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with prediction for 2030 and 2040. Summarize the information bt selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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The line chart depicts the information regarding the proportion of urbanisation in various countries
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the estimated values from 2030 to 2040.The data is calibrated in percentage.
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