You have just started a course in a college which has no sports facilities of its own. Write a letter to the manager of the nearest private sports club . In your letter • introduce yourself • say why you are interested in this sports club • ask some questions about the club e.g facilities, members , costs
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to express my interest to
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in
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the sport
sport
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sports
club
your
community college. I am applying for Change preposition
at your
this
post in response to an advertisement which was published in local
daily newspaper a Correct article usage
the local
course
of days ago . My name is Baxtinur Kholliyeva and I am a new student at the local college and would like to inquire about the facilities and membership options for your private sports Correct your spelling
couple
club
. I am interested in exploring the opportunities provided by your club
. I am also
interested to know about Correct article usage
the sport
sport
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sports
club
. I am expecting a comprehensive reply from you since
about the details of the activities and other information I requested.
I Change preposition
apply
kindy
request information regarding the sports facilities available, including types of sports, professional trainers, operating system and membership fees. I have been training with volleyball Correct your spelling
kindly
game
when I Fix the agreement mistake
games
playing
in the gym.
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play
However
, I do not know enough informations
about it. So , I have a lot of questions about your Change the wording
information
pieces of information
sport
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sports
club
. There are: 1) How much does the club
cost? 2 ) How many days a week is there? 3 ) What time is the club
day or night?
I hope you quickly reply
Yours faithfully ,
Baxtinur KholliyevaSubmitted by omondavlat91 on
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single idea per paragraph
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logical structure
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suitable writing tone
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complete response
Include specific details and personal experiences to make your request more engaging and convincing.
complete response
You have introduced yourself and stated the purpose of your letter well.
complete response
Your letter covers the essential questions about the sports club facilities and membership.
suitable writing tone
You have made a polite request for further information, which is appropriate for the context.