You have just started a course in a college which has no sports facilities of its own. Write a letter to the manager of the nearest private sports club . In your letter • introduce yourself • say why you are interested in this sports club • ask some questions about the club e.g facilities, members , costs

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter to express my interest
to
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in
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the sport
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sport
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club
your
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community college. I am applying for
this
post in response to an advertisement which was published in
local
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the local
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daily newspaper a
course
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couple
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of days ago . My name is Baxtinur Kholliyeva and I am a new student at the local college and would like to inquire about the facilities and membership options for your private sports
club
. I am interested in exploring the opportunities provided by your
club
. I am
also
interested to know about
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the sport
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sport
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club
. I am expecting a comprehensive reply from you
since
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about the details of the activities and other information I requested. I
kindy
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request information regarding the sports facilities available, including types of sports, professional trainers, operating system and membership fees. I have been training with volleyball
game
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games
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when I
playing
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in the gym.
However
, I do not know enough
informations
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about it. So , I have a lot of questions about your
sport
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club
. There are: 1) How much does the
club
cost? 2 ) How many days a week is there? 3 ) What time is the
club
day or night? I hope you quickly reply Yours faithfully , Baxtinur Kholliyeva
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single idea per paragraph
Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single idea or theme to enhance clarity and readability.
logical structure
Use paragraphing more effectively to separate different parts of your letter for a clearer logical structure.
suitable writing tone
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complete response
Include specific details and personal experiences to make your request more engaging and convincing.
complete response
You have introduced yourself and stated the purpose of your letter well.
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Your letter covers the essential questions about the sports club facilities and membership.
suitable writing tone
You have made a polite request for further information, which is appropriate for the context.
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