You have just started a course in a college which has no sports facilities of its own. Write a letter to the manager of the nearest private sports club . In your letter • introduce yourself • say why you are interested in this sports club • ask some questions about the club e.g facilities, members , costs

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter to express my interest

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the sport

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sport

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club

your

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community college. I am applying for

this

post in response to an advertisement which was published in

local

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daily newspaper a

course

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of days ago . My name is Baxtinur Kholliyeva and I am a new student at the local college and would like to inquire about the facilities and membership options for your private sports

club

. I am interested in exploring the opportunities provided by your

club

. I am

also

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sport

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club

. I am expecting a comprehensive reply from you

since

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about the details of the activities and other information I requested. I

kindy

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request information regarding the sports facilities available, including types of sports, professional trainers, operating system and membership fees. I have been training with volleyball

game

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when I

playing

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in the gym.

However

, I do not know enough

informations

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about it. So , I have a lot of questions about your

sport

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club

. There are: 1) How much does the

club

cost? 2 ) How many days a week is there? 3 ) What time is the

club

day or night? I hope you quickly reply Yours faithfully , Baxtinur Kholliyeva

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complete response

Include specific details and personal experiences to make your request more engaging and convincing.

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You have introduced yourself and stated the purpose of your letter well.

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Your letter covers the essential questions about the sports club facilities and membership.

suitable writing tone

You have made a polite request for further information, which is appropriate for the context.

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7 paragraphs

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