1-Museums and art galleries should focus on works that show the history and culture of their own country rather than works of other parts of the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that museums and

art

galleries should be

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an exhibition

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exhibition

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exhibitions

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of one country's own

artifacts

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artefacts

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and history

instead

of showing others. I

,

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believe diversity in museums

overweighs

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the drawbacks of

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opinion,

hence

i

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disagree with the statement.

To begin

with,

diveristy

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diversity

can play

major

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role in educational value. Exhibition of one country's own work can be beneficial for locals as it offers deeper insights

of

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their own heritage, though it can

be

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impact

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on tourism. Diversity is the most significant way to promote tourism and

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through

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it economic growth can be achieved easily. If

meusums

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museums

would

demonstarte

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demonstrate

variety that predominant the factor of global understanding.

With

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this

cultural exchange is something that enhances the knowledge and interest in

others

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history.

Furthermore

, impersonal relations can

be strengthen

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up

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by showing universal

art

. It

also

encourage

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wide

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prospective

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of viewers and

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for global collection.

Also

, it gives shows a balanced approach where both national and international

theme

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,

art

and

artifcats

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artefacts

can be shown to the locals and international people. It not only promotes diversity but the wide perspective of people via exchange of thoughts and opinions can enhance comprehension of

wider

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a wider

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range.

To conclude

, knowledge and

art

should not be limited to a particular place. The more we share it, the more it spreads and glorifies the beauty.