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Writing Samples
Band 3

write a letter to hr to complain about one of your colleug

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Dear Mrs. May Anna I am the Treatment coordinator of
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sabsaby
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sassaby
 and
dr
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. Amer. I want to
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inform
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infor
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inform
 you about the mental
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harassment
hersment
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illness
by
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miss pink
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 on my week off by
call
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 and asking
the
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passwor
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password
 of
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dr
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sabsaby
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sassaby
 pc password
with
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is
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against
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aginst
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against
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 the rule of harmony after informing
that
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 my doctor already
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 me
that
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not
shear
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 the
pc
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PC
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 password with
any one
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anyone
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 because he
have is
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inmportant
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important
 information in it.
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this
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i
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 have already informed
to
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miss pink after that she
is thretning
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threatened
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 me by taking
HR
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 name
that
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will
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 complain about it. She is not my
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 or my manager
then
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i
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am respecting
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 her words. is she
dont
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doesn't
 have
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the manners
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manners
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 that if another
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dr
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doctor
want
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wants
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 to use the room she should check one day
befor
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before
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 week off. regards, Akansha H

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coherence cohesion
Try to create logical structures in your writing by arranging the points in a clear and understandable sequence. Make sure each paragraph focuses on a single idea to improve coherence.
greeting and closing
Ensure your closing statement matches the professional tone required for letters to HR. Consider correcting grammatical errors as well.
task achievement
Review standard letter-writing conventions and check for grammatical errors. Ensure that the tone suits the formal nature of the complaint.
greeting and closing
You have included opening and closing statements, which are essential for the structure.
task achievement
You addressed all the necessary points for a complete response, which helps in conveying your message clearly.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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