The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The given graph indicates how the figures for production levels of the main sorts of fuel changed in the UK from 1981 to 2000.
Overall
, the
figure
for Coal declined
while
the statistics for both
Petroleum
and Natural
Gas
witnessed an increase during
this
period. In 1981, the
figure
for Coal started at 80
energy
units
. After 5
years
, there was a slight decrease to 61 in the data on Coal. After undergoing a slight decline of 2
energy
units
in 1991, the
figure
for that significantly went down to 40
energy
units
for the next five
years
. In 2000, the data on that hit the lowest point at 39
energy
units
. The
figure
for
Petroleum
started at 85
energy
units
and outnumbered that for Natural
Gas
with a margin of 25
energy
units
in 1981.
While
the data on
Petroleum
witnessed
a
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remarkable growth to 140
energy
units
, the
figure
for Natural
gas
remains unchanged after five
years
. After undergoing a decrease of 40
energy
units
in 1991, the
figure
for
Petroleum
reached 140
energy
units
for the next 9
years
.
In addition
, after 14
years
, the
figure
for Natural
gas
significantly went up to 100
energy
units
.
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