Cars have become convenient and economical form of transport and as a result, the use of cars has increased dramatically during the last century. Discuss the problems this increase has created and offer some practical solutions.

Cars

viewed

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as a comfortable transportation and

also

beneficial economically by individuals,

consequently

, the number of

cars owner

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car owners

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has significantly risen over the

last

century.

However

, the increase

of

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cars

will eventually lead to some problems

such

as

traffic

congestion and

air

pollution. Governments should take any measures to combat these issues.

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,

cars

are not

an

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environmental

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environmentally

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friendly

vehicle

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. It is insufficient for a vast number of passengers,

uneffectively

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ineffectively

, sometimes one car

only

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driven

for

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one person as its passenger.

In addition

, the road

did

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has

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not expanded largely in size and at some point will

inadequate

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be inadequate

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to balance the mass number of vehicles that pass through it.

Thus

, the risen amount of car owners will

consequently

create

a

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traffic

congestion.

Furthermore

,

traffic

congestions

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congestion

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will escalate the

air

pollution index that

accordingly

, will endanger the residents’ health. The governments should create some solutions to tackle these problems. Public

transportations’

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transportation’s

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quality and quantity must be improved to attract the residents to take buses,

train

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trains

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, and trams for daily travel. The large size of public vehicles

make

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them

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it

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possible to bring a

lot

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large

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amount of passengers,

subsequently

, the

traffic

congestion’s

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congestion

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rate will lessen and lower the levels of

air

pollution.

Additionally

, laws that

regulated

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the quality of gas

emission

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emissions

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by private vehicles

such

as

cars

should

be tighten

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. Authorities must

inquire

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the car owners to periodically check up on their

cars

’ gas emission quality and perform strict punishments to discipline owners who are not obedient. In conclusion, the expansion of

cars

will eventually create

a poor congestion circumstances

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poor congestion circumstances

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and lead to polluted

air

conditions. To combat those, authorities must refine their public

transportations

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transportation

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and make

a

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apply

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tight regulations about gas

emission

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emissions

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.