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The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007,2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selectig and reporting the maain features and make the compariosn where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007,2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selectig and reporting the maain features and make the compariosn where relevant.
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The Bart chart below illustrates the number of family members in the United States and their income per year in 2017, 2011 and 2015.
Overall
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, it can be seen that 2015 had the highest income at $100,000 or more
while
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 the lowest had in million $75,000-$99,999 every year. Looking at Bart in detail, it starting the highest data which was at $100,000 or more in 2015 bigger an
amount
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 of 33 than in 2007 and 2011 at approximately 30
as well as
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 26 .
Moreover
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, $25,000-$49.999 in 2011 was higher at 30 than in 2015 and 2007 at about 28
also
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 26.
In addition
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, $75,000-99,999 in 2011 was larger an
amount
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 of 28 than in 2015
then
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 in 2017 at about 27
likewise
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 the point 25. Regarding the lowest data, $50,000-$74,999 in 3 years had the same at
amount
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 21. And
then
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, less than $25.000 stayed the same an
amount
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 of 14 in 2017, 2011,
as well as
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 2015.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "as well as".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words amount with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • annual income
  • household
  • income range
  • lower-income
  • middle-income
  • higher-income
  • trends
  • economic factors
  • policy changes
  • socioeconomic planning
  • features
  • comparison
  • increase/decrease
  • fluctuations
  • number of households
  • data analysis
  • observed changes
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