The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain. The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
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The presented graphs showcase three of the most popular fast foods and their order rates. The first graph represents
correlation
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the correlation
a correlation
of
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income
and preferred food while
the second
,
shows the Remove the comma
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overall
consumption trend.
As seen in the first graph, a high or average
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average-income
income
person’s most preferred choice is hamburgers. With their sharp growth in popularity, as shown in the second chart; they out-match fish and chips and pizza
. While
fish and chips gain popularity with average income
and become the most ordered food with lower financial status; pizza
experiences a steady decline as the person’s finance
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finances
lowers
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As demonstrated in the second graph; Regardless of Correct your spelling
lower
income
, since 1970 there has been an ascending trend of ordering hamburgers and pizza
, with hamburgers still being the most popular asked for food while
the trend for fish and chips has been losing the hype, causing a decrease in orders.
With people's taste
changing, there is no telling how the future will precede but we could deduce that with its steady growth in popularity; Fix the agreement mistake
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pizza
might take the lead as the most popular.Submitted by anahitakhosravi4 on
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