The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain. The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in 

Britain. The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The presented graphs showcase three of the most popular fast foods and their order rates. The first graph represents
correlation
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the correlation
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of
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income
and preferred food
while
the
second
,
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shows the
overall
consumption trend. As seen in the first graph, a high or
average
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income
person’s most preferred choice is hamburgers. With their sharp growth in popularity, as shown in the second chart; they out-match fish and chips and
pizza
.
While
fish and chips gain popularity with average
income
and become the most ordered food with lower financial status;
pizza
experiences a steady decline as the person’s
finance
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lowers
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. As demonstrated in the second graph; Regardless of
income
, since 1970 there has been an ascending trend of ordering hamburgers and
pizza
, with hamburgers still being the most popular asked for food
while
the trend for fish and chips has been losing the hype, causing a decrease in orders. With people's
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changing, there is no telling how the future will precede but we could deduce that with its steady growth in popularity;
pizza
might take the lead as the most popular.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words income, pizza with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graphs" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Expenditure
  • Fast food
  • Income groups
  • High-income
  • Low-income
  • Medium-income
  • Hamburgers
  • Fried chicken
  • Fish & chips
  • Consumption
  • Trends
  • Significant increase
  • Decline
  • Popularity
  • Spending patterns
  • Consumption trends
  • Lifestyle
  • Preferences
  • Prices
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