The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planed future development of the site.
The maps illustrate the town of Norbiton’s present view of the industrial area and design future progress of the site.
Overall
, factories will be converted into houses in future development. Moreover
, they are going to add four new features to the plan. Which is medical
center, playground, school, and shops.
In the present look, there is a river on the north side, and beside it, there is a farmland situated. Next to Correct article usage
a medical
this
, there is a town on the west side. Furthermore
, there is a road
shaped like a ring. Around the road
, there are eight factories provided.
In the future view, the factories are going to destroy and construct houses. This
will be a big change in the plan. Moreover
, In the middle of the river, they are going to construct a road
and design a house near the farmland. They are going to add again a ring-shaped road
below the first one. Meanwhile on the right-side medical center
and on the left side shops are designed. Change the spelling
centre
Further
, there are going add a playground between two houses.Submitted by shruthiudhai7 on
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