The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planed future development of the site.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planed future development of the site.
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The maps illustrate the town of Norbiton’s present view of the industrial area and design future progress of the site.
Overall
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, factories will be converted into houses in future development.
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, they are going to add four new features to the plan. Which is
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center, playground, school, and shops. In the present look, there is a river on the north side, and beside it, there is a farmland situated. Next to
this
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, there is a town on the west side.
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, there is a
road
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shaped like a ring. Around the
road
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, there are eight factories provided. In the future view, the factories are going to destroy and construct houses.
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will be a big change in the plan.
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, In the middle of the river, they are going to construct a
road
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and design a house near the farmland. They are going to add again a ring-shaped
road
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below the first one. Meanwhile on the right-side medical
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and on the left side shops are designed.
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, there are going add a playground between two houses.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "moreover".
Vocabulary: Replace the words road with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • development
  • infrastructure
  • manufacturing
  • facilities
  • transition
  • planning
  • commercial
  • residential
  • renovation
  • urban planning
  • sustainability
  • environmental impact
  • local economy
  • rejuvenation
  • construction
  • modernization
  • accessibility
  • demolition
  • gentrification
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