The bar chart shows the divorce rates in two European countries from 2011 to 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The illustrated bar chart depicts the
divorce
rate
comparison in between two European counrties
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countries
in
between 2011 and 2015.
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Overall
, both countries show opposite trends where Sweden
shows a downward trend, Finland
shows an upward trend over the years. It is observed Correct word choice
and Finland
Sweden
managed to reduce its divorce
rate
by over 10% , while
Finland's divorce
rate
rose by almost 10%.
To begin
with, Finland
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Finland's
divorce
rate
was
started at well below 40% in 2011 which took a dive Unnecessary verb
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further
down in the next year reaching at
just over 30%. Remove the preposition
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However
, in the later years
a consistent rise Add a comma
years,
is
observed reaching marginally above 40% in 2014 and Wrong verb form
was
remained
stable in 2015.
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remaining
On the other hand
, Sweden
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Sweden's
divorce
rate
was stated well over 40% in 2011 which rose to a record high near 50% in the following year, although
Sweden
managed to reduce the divorce
rate
steadily in the later years reaching down to
below 40% in 2015.Change preposition
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Vocabulary: Replace the words divorce, rate, sweden with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reduce" was used 2 times.
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