The chart below gives information about how families in one country spend their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the average weekly spending by families in the years 1968 and 2018.
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, it consists of eight different items.
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, in these options, food generally comprised more proportion in both years, especially in the year 1968. Linking Words
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, the charges of fuel and power represented the lowest rate in 1968 and 2018.
Looking at the bar chart in detail, the fees for food presented the highest percentage in 1968(35 per cent). Linking Words
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, it approximately declined to 17% in 2017(18%). Linking Words
Subsequently
, housing and " clothing and footwear showed an equivalent rate in 1968, accounting for 10%. Linking Words
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, in 2018, there was a significant distinction between them, which roughly made up 10%.
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personal goods and transport were given a similar trend. In 1968, they accounted for an equal percentage (8%), Linking Words
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transport constituted around 14% and personal goods made up 4%. As for fuel and power and clothing and footwear, in general, both showed a lower parentage and did not exceed 10%, particularly in the year 2018 which did not surpass 5%.Linking Words
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