The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007,2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selectig and reporting the maain features and make the compariosn where relevant.
The bar chart demonstrates the annuity number of
families
received in America between 2007 and 2015 that started from less than 25 thousand
dollars
up to 100 thousand
dollars
.
Overall
, it is clear from the graph that more than 30 million
families
got 100,000 dollars
or more in 2015. Surprisingly, almost the same amount of households
were equally getting between 50,000 and 74,999 dollars
in the 3 years, whereas
the amount of people who got paid less than 25,000 dollars
were
relatively different.
Change the verb form
was
According to
2007 estimates, around 29 million
households
' annual revenue started from one hundred thousand
or more, and half of the previous number of families
also
got half of the highest income that could be given. In 2011, the annuity of approximately 56,000,000 households
began at below 25,000 to a maximum of 49,999. Also
, a notable quantity of families
took 100 thousand
or above.
In terms of annual revenue about 33 million
households
were offered in 2015, a hundred thousand
or more were taken by this
huge number. It is shown that about 37 million
received a range of 50,000 to 99,999.Submitted by salmanasrnasr on
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