The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007,2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selectig and reporting the maain features and make the compariosn where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007,2011 and 2015.

Summarise the information by selectig and reporting the maain features and make the compariosn where relevant.
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The bar chart demonstrates the annuity number of
families
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received in America between 2007 and 2015 that started from less than 25
thousand
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dollars
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up to 100
thousand
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dollars
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.
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, it is clear from the graph that more than 30
million
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families
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got 100,000
dollars
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or more in 2015. Surprisingly, almost the same amount of
households
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were equally getting between 50,000 and 74,999
dollars
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in the 3 years,
whereas
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the amount of people who got paid less than 25,000
dollars
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were
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relatively different.
According to
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2007 estimates, around 29
million
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households
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' annual revenue started from one hundred
thousand
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or more, and half of the previous number of
families
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also
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got half of the highest income that could be given. In 2011, the annuity of approximately 56,000,000
households
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began at below 25,000 to a maximum of 49,999.
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, a notable quantity of
families
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took 100
thousand
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or above. In terms of annual revenue about 33
million
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households
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were offered in 2015, a hundred
thousand
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or more were taken by
this
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huge number. It is shown that about 37
million
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received a range of 50,000 to 99,999.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words families, thousand, dollars, million, households with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • annual income
  • household
  • income range
  • lower-income
  • middle-income
  • higher-income
  • trends
  • economic factors
  • policy changes
  • socioeconomic planning
  • features
  • comparison
  • increase/decrease
  • fluctuations
  • number of households
  • data analysis
  • observed changes
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