You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter • say where you think you left the papers • explain why they are so important • tell the manager what you want him/her to do
Dear Sir or Madam
I am writing to inquire about significant documents which were given to me by my boss ,
however
I attended a meeting in your Add a comma
however,
hotel
's conference hall a few days ago and realized upon returning home that I had forgotten to take with me several significant papers
.
A few days ago I visited your hotel
for the purpose of the meeting and it was held in meeting
hall . There were significant Add an article
the meeting
papers
with me , as I came to hotel
after my work and my boss gave me new Add an article
the hotel
project’s
documents . Change noun form
project
Papers
were in the black folder because they are more for holding by hand . I had put them under my chair and while
meeting
was starting I was reading them , Add an article
the meeting
a meeting
however
when the meeting finished I had thought that I brought them with me but when I returned home I recognized that I did not bring them , therefore
they are under the chair which I sat down .
The papers
are significant to me , as I am new to company
called Sunshine and it is my first month in Add an article
a company
this
company . Therefore
my boss had given to
me Change preposition
apply
new
Correct article usage
a new
building’s
plan and drawings but I missed them in your Change noun form
building
hotel
.
You could send the above-mentioned thing to my e-mail or a
fax Remove the article
apply
,
if you Remove the comma
apply
could not
do it call my phone (99899990)Wrong verb form
cannot
I
will take it back.
Yours faithfully,
AsadbekCorrect word choice
and I
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single idea per paragraph
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logical structure
Consider breaking your explanation into smaller, more digestible paragraphs to improve coherence.
greeting and closing
The letter clearly greets the recipient and provides a polite closing, which is appropriate for formal communication.
complete response
The response adequately covers the purpose of the letter, explaining the importance of the documents and specifying the required action.
suitable writing tone
The tone of the letter is suitably formal and polite, aligning well with the context of the communication.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite