The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbition, and planned furure development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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map illustrates the sites of an industrial region of Norbiton, and the other map shows the future of the same region after

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the

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modern planning. As an initial overlook, we can see that, there is no life in

this

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area. There are just several factories distributed around the route.

This

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route connected with the major street on the side of the Norbiton industrial area. A more detailed look at the second map reveals that

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apply

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the new scheme involves plenty

houses

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of houses

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and

offeres

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offers

several facilities. There are enormous housing distributed

on

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in

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the area rather than factories with little variation.

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, structured a school, playground and medical center .

On the contrary

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, there are some shops.

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made new route network with a bridge for

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the river to the other side of

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farmland. The bridge transport to the new housing in farmland. The new planning creates a valid town to live

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in and

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creates an integral city with the necessary services