The table below gives information about the percentage of workforce employed in six industries in Australia between 1989 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates a
comparsion
of the proportion of work force in different industries in Australia during 1989 and 2008. The data are measured in percentages.
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comparison
Overall
, all industries
rates experienced a downward trend except manufacturing and Change noun form
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care, they both Correct your spelling
health
shows
an upward trend. Wrong verb form
showed
Additionally
, the most significant change can be obseved
on manufacturing.
In 1989, working Correct your spelling
observed
on
manufacturing was the most popular Change preposition
in
between
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among
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employees
qourter
. Retail was on the second rank, at 11.8%, making it slightly more than Correct your spelling
quarter
helth
care by approximately 2%. Correct your spelling
health
Moreover
, tourism and education were relatively low ,they both less than 7%. Constraction
was 7.6%
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Construction
On the other hand
, retail and health care were the
top Change preposition
at the
on
the list at 10.1% and 11.3% respectively in 2009. Meanwhile, Change preposition
of
manufacturing
rate decreased by around 6% to 9.8%, Correct article usage
the manufacturing
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, constraction
rose to 8.3% . Tourism and education roughly had the same they, both around 7 part of handerad.Correct your spelling
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