The chart below shows the result of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habit in five Australian cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reposting the min features, and make comparisons where relevant

The chart below shows the result of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habit in five Australian cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reposting the min features, and make comparisons where relevant
The given chart illustrates the
percentage
from the study which is based on the preferences of individuals about buying and drinking
coffee
and tea in
last
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the last
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4 weeks in 5 metropolitan cities of Australia.
Overall
, the highest percentages of purchases were for
coffee
and tea bought in
cafe
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cafes
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, followed by instant
coffee
,
then
, fresh
coffee
. With respect to the data for people who went to a cafe for
coffee
and tea ,Melbourne reached a peak of approximately 65%,
then
Sydney and Hobart had the second highest
percentage
of about 60%.
Finally
, Brisbane and Adelaide witnessed
least
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amount of drinks bought in a cafe,
leveling
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off at almost 55% and 50%, respectively. Turning to instant
coffee
, Hobart and Brisbane had the highest
percentage
of just under 55%. Adelaide was
next,
reaching 50%. Melbourne and Sydney had experienced the
least
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lowest
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percentage
which is just above 45%.
Finally
,
the
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Sydney and Melbourne hit the highest point to nearly 43% in buying fresh
coffee
. Hobart followed with a little less than 40%. The
least
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last
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consumers of fresh
coffee
were seen in Brisbane with
percentage
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the percentage
a percentage
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of more than a third.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "finally".
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, coffee with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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